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Piano Notes

  • Writer: Hobbes
    Hobbes
  • Jan 22, 2020
  • 1 min read

Pen to Paper.

Piano notes trickling,

A wonderful pitter-patter.

Soft as her touch.

Winding, melding-

Growing older,

Moving out.

A tearful moment

Come and gone.

Realization of loss, love, relief

And everything in between.



 
 
 

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6 Comments


Hobbes
Hobbes
Jan 27, 2020

That’s totally fine and understandable. And of course, the more poetry you write, the more confident you’ll become with the process. I need to remind myself that all the time :) If someday you do decide to publish, you’ll have a great selection of poems to pick from.

Thanks again!

Hobbes

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canterjewel
canterjewel
Jan 27, 2020

Sadly no, I haven't gone public with any of my work yet; writing poetry is more of a coping mechanism/hobby for me at this time, so I don't feel like I have the consistency to keep up with a blog or anything. I'm also not super confident about it either. I don't know if it'd really be blog-quality. I do like the idea of publishing one day, though. But that's probably just another unrealistic daydream. Such is the life of a writer. 😂

No problem! I'm happy to have a found a poet so original and relatable!

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Hobbes
Hobbes
Jan 26, 2020

Oh nice! That’s good to hear. Word of mouth is always effective.

Well, awesome! Double high-five, my friend. 🥳

Thank you, I’ve never heard of Iain St. Thomas, but I will definitely check him out now.

Do you post your work publicly anywhere? Feel free to link it if you like.

Again, I appreciate your kind words, and I can only pray that my poetry lives up to your descriptions :)

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canterjewel
canterjewel
Jan 24, 2020

I'm glad too! I was recommended here by a peer in an online writing community I'm a part of, so you've got a few fans!

(High-five! And hilariously enough, l also happen to be a type 9 as well. Though I know much less about the Enneagram than I do MBTI.)

I'd say you're off to a fantastic start; some of your poems remind me of Iain St. Thomas. He's another contemporary poet, and his book I Wrote This For You is what inspired me personally to pursue contemporary poetry.

His and your styles both have a very raw, yet gentle feel to them that invokes emotion and empathy easily.

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Hobbes
Hobbes
Jan 24, 2020

Hey, thank you! I’m glad you found me. :) I don’t have many people visiting my site right now, so props to you for checking it out. (Also high-five, Mediator)

That’s a wonderful description you provided. It’s hard to know how my writing is being perceived by others, so that’s reassuring to hear, and I hope future poems can produce the same effect.

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